Production - Teacher comments

Below is the feedback which we received from Louisa.

I think the main part which we've focused in changing in light of the feedback, is the structure. We've focused on this by clearly showing off the chorus as it is up beat by having faster editing, i think this will be effective as we'll be also adding in skaters and Cindy dancing to go with the 'urban' vibe of the music video and the artist!

Another part which we've tried to focus on is the shot types, as some footage of skaters have been added in the updated rough cut and almost all the shots vary which adds a good edge with both movement in the camera work and in the footage.

Another part where we messed up was there werent enough figrigs when majority of our footage was taken! This reduced the amount of movement we could add in. However we then started to use figrig after school in our locations getting movement with the figrig.